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Just watching the fish.

—Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!)

Comparison Page 64 66 I am skipping some pages in this scene here, the original page 65 I could discard since it didn’t contribute much. You might also noticed that I have completely cut out the part where Quesadilla was injured from this scene, it’s partially because it felt unnecessary, but I can’t deny it was also because when I was originally planning and thumbnailing the new pages for chapter 2 I had only just lost my dog, and I could not emotionally handle hurting a dog, fictional or not.