Pecan, holding back laughter: Do you think he might be trolling us-
Badger: I WILL SEND YOU STRAIGHT TO HELL MYSELF
—Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!)
Comparison Page 29 30 Managed to condense these two pages! I think I improved the dialogue a lot from the original, the old just seemed so off and jilted. Also I think it’s more clear that Aksel’s a big fucking dude, especially compared to everyone else.