First page! Make sure to check back on Wednesday, as I’m now updating three times a week.

 

–Redo Notes– (Possible Spoilers for new readers!)

Comparison Page  First thing to note is that Potato’s narration has been taken out, hopefully making the opening a little more organic. I was thinking that the original seemed a little shoehorned in here? It will show up later though, just not in the same way.