I briefly considered naming the kids’ group chat after an old title from a group chat my friends and I have, but given that our sense of humor lends to weird and terrible group chat names I decided against it. You’re welcome, honestly.
—Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!)
Comparison Page 123 I removed Brett’s monologue and instead added him looking at his phone, I think it shows his anxiety better than him just spelling it out. I do feel bad about cutting out Brett smashing his sandwich against his face and then throwing it into the wind though.