Getting back to the present! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 148 &149 Condensed these pages! Except for the last dialogue on page 149, that goes on the next page.
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It’s Hat!!! And some more upyrs. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 147 Some composition changes! And we get a little better look at the druids, who I had fun designing.
Sometimes Aksel’s ridiculous height (8’9”, not counting his horns) is super hilarious to me, other times, like in panel 2 where he gets decapitated, it’s… still hilarious actually. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 146 More dialogue[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Can you guess how old Etsuo is? There’s no prize, except for knowing a thing. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 145 Just some dialogue changes here.
It’s Lee and Faber! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 152 &153 Badger and Pecan work together now! And added in Faber! Going off script from the original, but don’t worry, we’ll get back on track soon.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Who’s this? Also fun fact, the Orange High Mage Wuomi is married to the Violet High Mage (named Tuone)! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 144 Some more interpersonal dialogue between the High Mages! And Dato continues[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(That one is Alex) —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 143 The king cuts their conversation short. I also added some dialogue between the High Mages and made the room they were trapped in more interesting.
Man, don’t you hate when you order something and the wrong thing is delivered? And also it sasses you. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 142 Dato’s a bit more snarky here.
Someone’s a little testy. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 141 Wanted the king to seem scarier, so I added this in this little scene.
Thanks for waiting everyone! It’s customary to bow before the king. Also, little cameo here (in silhouette unfortunately though)! The two upyrs on king’s right are my friend’s characters (named Alex and Arron!). She’s my beta reader and helps me[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…