And back to these guys! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 156 &161 &162 Lot of changes here! Only took the last panel from 156, and condensed 161 and 162.
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Everyone reaches a breaking point, sometimes. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 155 Composition changes again!
Page 122 Things are falling apart. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 154 A lot of dialogue and composition changes lol.
Another interruption. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) No comparison again.
—Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page… Not really anything I can compare to. I just wanted more interactions between Faber and Lee to flesh their characters out.
It’s Lee and Faber! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 152 &153 Badger and Pecan work together now! And added in Faber! Going off script from the original, but don’t worry, we’ll get back on track soon.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sorry about missing Monday’s update! —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 152 This page got stretched into two, just like the last one lol. Composition and dialogue changes, namely making Badger and Pecan be more cooperative, and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Understanding. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 151 Additional dialogue, like in the last page. And the transition to Pecan and Badger has changed.
His husband’s name was Odin. Their daughters’ names were Jannike, Astrid, Lise, Oda, and Petra. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 151 Added a LOT of additional dialogue here, so this page got stretched into two. I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
O-oh. —Redo Notes— (Possible spoilers for new readers!) Comparison Page 150 Lot of dialogue changes. Daniel and Aksel’s reactions were a little too volatile/out of character for them, and it felt very clunky.